A Slave's Journey by Thomas
After an agonisingly long, wait we were dragged onto the huge vessel which would completely change our lives. The wooden goliath dominated the coastal harbour. The beautiful sea was calm unlike my heart which was racing as I realised there was no way back. However, I felt it would get worse even though my body was full to bursting with fear. I was right it got worse very soon as a hippo skin whip lashed down upon my aching back. Strapped tightly together me and my fellow slaves snaked round the perimeter of the splinter giving deck. The invincible fetters rubbed my skin red raw. The crew of doom stared at me for what felt like an age with their menacing eyes. They were doing the same thing to everybody to try and spot potential trouble makers. Plenty of the younger slaves were crying. I didn’t blame them. In the mist of the impossible heat we were forced to stand still. Finally, we were ordered to descend into the murky darkness.
Descending from the bright African
sunlight dank dark hold was a huge change. As the door clicked shut we heard
the crew stamping above like drunkards thankfully it drowned out the noise of
vomiting. However, I could still smell it mixed with human waste and sweat I
was nearly sick as the smell attacked my nose. As my eyes adjusted to the
darkness all I could see was hundreds of whimpering slaves. Strapped together
in strong as steel manacles. We were
bound to our poll where we would stay for the next few months. The masters
extinguished the lamps for a sleepless
night of misery.
Really good writing Thomas. I was very impressed with this. Well done.
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This is great Thomas! Really powerful descriptive writing. Well done, Mum x
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this Thomas. I am really impressed with the writing. Dad.
ReplyDeleteWow! It is very hard for us to imagine how awful life would have been for a slave. You have described it very vividly and brought it to life! Well done, Thomas. Grannie
ReplyDeleteamazing work
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