A Slave's Journey by Ilyas
Eventually, we were forced onto the majestic galleon. Fear flooded my veins. I wanted to cry and felt sick. I was chained tightly in thick, iron fetters, with my fellow slaves we tried to escape, but could not. The crew stared at us with disgust, looking ready to whip us if we didn’t follow orders. I could see the younger slaves crying after being separated from their parents. We were ordered to stand in the midday heat for what seemed like a year. After what seemed like the worst day of my life, we were ordered to go into the hull.
As we opened the dirty, hatch and went down the rotten
steps, it smelt revolting. The first thing to hit me was the smell of human
skin. I was physically sick due to the unbearable heat and truly awful
conditions. My heart sank. Once we were chained, the hard metal chains fetters
rubbed my skin raw as younger slaves were crying because they have been separated
from their parents. Tiredly, I closed my eyes slightly relived that it was the
end of the day.
That night, I could barely sleep after the tragic day I
had had. I found it hard to sleep because of the heat going through my veins
like it was connected to me. I felt anxious of being a slave for a long time.
Suddenly, the ship moved away from my homeland I knew there was no way back.
Ilyas, well done on this great writing. You concentrated and worked hard and it really shows in your finished piece.
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